Archive for the ‘Line in the Valley’ Category

Hope you like this, guys. Links to all other chapters and excerpts are below: https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/03/22/novel-excerpt-first-chapter-of-book-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/05/line-in-the-valley-chapter-2/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/08/line-in-the-valley-chapter-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/05/13/line-in-the-valley-chapter-5/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/06/10/line-in-the-valley-part-of-chapter-6/ ****************************** Corporal Marc D’Angelo crouched below the edge of the low steel wall encircling the five-ton truck’s bed, keeping as still as possible. His breath was ragged and his heart pounded so hard it hurt. Of […]


Line in the Valley, Chapter 3. Please keep the advice and suggestions coming, I listen to it all. Thanks guys. NOTE ADDED 4/9/13: I made some changes based on very good critiques from several readers. Please check out the revisions and let me know what you think. Links to all other chapters and excerpts are […]


Chapter 2 of book three in my series. Other chapters can be found below: https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/03/22/novel-excerpt-first-chapter-of-book-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/08/line-in-the-valley-chapter-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/18/line-in-the-valley-chapter-4/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/05/13/line-in-the-valley-chapter-5/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/06/10/line-in-the-valley-part-of-chapter-6/ Looking for honest critiques. Hope you enjoy it, and thanks. ———————————————————— Chapter 2 Sergeant First Class Jerry Nunez kicked open the humvee door and stepped out onto the pavement. As he stretched his cramped muscles, all […]


I’ve decided to post the first chapter of book 3 in my series. It’s titled Line in the Valley, and is about Jerry Nunez’s unit fighting a cartel incursion on the Texas border. The Amazon judges read this and decided it blows, so I’d like to hear what you guys think. Links to all other […]