Posts Tagged ‘Line in the Valley’

I was only going to put four chapters of this book on my blog, but due to overwhelming demand (one guy named Mikey) I decided to go ahead and put chapter 5 up. Critiques, please. Links to all other chapters and excerpts are below: https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/03/22/novel-excerpt-first-chapter-of-book-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/05/line-in-the-valley-chapter-2/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/08/line-in-the-valley-chapter-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/18/line-in-the-valley-chapter-4/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/06/10/line-in-the-valley-part-of-chapter-6/ ———————————————————– Chapter 5 First platoon huddled […]


Hope you like this, guys. Links to all other chapters and excerpts are below: https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/03/22/novel-excerpt-first-chapter-of-book-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/05/line-in-the-valley-chapter-2/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/08/line-in-the-valley-chapter-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/05/13/line-in-the-valley-chapter-5/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/06/10/line-in-the-valley-part-of-chapter-6/ ****************************** Corporal Marc D’Angelo crouched below the edge of the low steel wall encircling the five-ton truck’s bed, keeping as still as possible. His breath was ragged and his heart pounded so hard it hurt. Of […]


Line in the Valley, Chapter 3. Please keep the advice and suggestions coming, I listen to it all. Thanks guys. NOTE ADDED 4/9/13: I made some changes based on very good critiques from several readers. Please check out the revisions and let me know what you think. Links to all other chapters and excerpts are […]