I was only going to put four chapters of this book on my blog, but due to overwhelming demand (one guy named Mikey) I decided to go ahead and put chapter 5 up. Critiques, please. Links to all other chapters and excerpts are below: https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/03/22/novel-excerpt-first-chapter-of-book-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/05/line-in-the-valley-chapter-2/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/08/line-in-the-valley-chapter-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/18/line-in-the-valley-chapter-4/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/06/10/line-in-the-valley-part-of-chapter-6/ ———————————————————– Chapter 5 First platoon huddled […]

Hope you like this, guys. Links to all other chapters and excerpts are below: https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/03/22/novel-excerpt-first-chapter-of-book-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/05/line-in-the-valley-chapter-2/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/04/08/line-in-the-valley-chapter-3/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/05/13/line-in-the-valley-chapter-5/ https://chrishernandezauthor.com/2013/06/10/line-in-the-valley-part-of-chapter-6/ ****************************** Corporal Marc D’Angelo crouched below the edge of the low steel wall encircling the five-ton truck’s bed, keeping as still as possible. His breath was ragged and his heart pounded so hard it hurt. Of […]